lunes, 5 de octubre de 2015

Written Task Corrected

Dear Dill,

Its funny how ironic things can be in real life, yesterday events where a little like that I think? Before I tell you what happened I’m just gonna say Im fine. If you are wondering, Atticus and Aunt Alexandra alright too.

As you know in my school every Halloween we make a performance on stage. Mrs. Merriweather composed a pageant and I was going to act on it along with other kids of my school, seems fun right? Well it wasn’t, Mrs. Merriwather thought it would be adorable to dress up the kids as Maycomb’s agricultural products. I was to be a ham, If you had seen me you would laugh so hard you would had fell from your sit, the only thing I did enjoy was watching Cecil Jacobs dress up like a cow. My costume by the way was a bit uncomfortable, Jem said I looked like a ham with legs, but the costume was too big aldo I thank god I had it on that day.


In my imagination I assumed my presentation would be perfect and that all Maycomb County was going to watch me preform including Atticus and Aunt Alexandra but it wasn’t like that. Only Jem saw my performance on stage as the other family members had several excuses for not attending to my show. Anyway, I did a special performance to Cal and Auntie at home and Jem said he would walk me to the school and back. The sky was full of grey fat clouds and it was a warm weather for October so we thought it would rain when we got home. When we were passing the Radley place Cecil jumped from the bushes and made us scream of fright so in my head I started plotting vengeance. At school Cecil and me stay together and Jem gave me thirty cents so Cecil and me collected money to go to the house of horrors, don’t you worry you didn’t lost any fun as the house was a disappointment for the both of us.

viernes, 2 de octubre de 2015

Rationale, To Kill a Mockingbird Written Task

For my written task I wrote an informal letter from the main character point of view about the issue in the books ending. The letter was from Scout to Dill because he is not in Maycomb when the events happen so its very credible that Scout would write a letter to him and its informal because they are best friends.

My task is not directed to a certain group of people but for anyone who likes the book and wants to read fan fiction and I think I would be published on my English class blog.
In my letter I tried to present how the character is according to the book and how she reacts after the things that happen through the last chapters and how this changes her point of view about things and make her become more mature evolving as a child to a pre-teenager with a impeccable moral compass and a very open minded opinions about race, feminism and discrimination.


For my next written task or essay I will try to overcome the things I didn’t achieve in this one like the grammar, spelling, punctuation and capitalization where I had errors. Also for this task we had a lot of time to finish it so I have to improve my writing so I write faster in the future.